Poem~ Letting Her Go. 

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Scars and bruises never stay,
the way her name is inked an ample deep.
She lives until eternity, is all I can pray
While I’m departing and she won’t weep.

I embrace the last site my eyes sought,
a poised smile on her soft face
What thoughts were really bought
and, was I ever a part of her fame?

I applaud all those faces, they
make my love turn to fog.
The humorous fact is now I’m away,
Was I ever told she moved on?

They describe her as subtle,
ingenious, but another way a lot brazen.
“she’s so chatty and a lot to handle!”
she was on a path away from the haven.

But mind you, I’m done.
She’s happy and that’d end my role.
In her heart, I made a pretty sketch,
but now I’m letting her go…

 

Note:

This is very much random, and apparently, I was supposed to write something about ‘letting her go’ but a bit poetry wouldn’t hurt, now would it? Please tell me in the comment section below. Thanks! X

Love

Anchal.

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16 Comments Add yours

  1. opalomnix says:

    Hello! I enjoyed giving your poem a read, I especially liked the 3rd and 4th lines in the 3rd stanza, It reminded me of a similar situation I had experienced previously. I look forward to seeing what else you create!
    -Opal

    Liked by 2 people

    1. ANCHAL94 says:

      I’m so glad! Thanks. Xx

      Liked by 1 person

  2. A pretty sketch indeed, you’re very good at this. Keep it up!
    Will follow for more 😊

    Liked by 2 people

    1. ANCHAL94 says:

      I really appreciate it. Thanks love! Xx

      Liked by 1 person

  3. gitanjali says:

    Priceless lines …real creation ….👍

    Liked by 2 people

    1. ANCHAL94 says:

      I’m so glad to hear this… thanks! Xx

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Srijan says:

    I love the way you write!💐

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ANCHAL94 says:

      I love that You commented! X 💖

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Srijan says:

        Haha, I had to. You write so well! :”)

        Liked by 1 person

  5. Nicely written. Keep up the good work.
    Not all love stories end up in happily ever after. How a small town guy was left collecting the rummages of his love after being crushed by a big town girl.

    https://www.obsoletereality.com/from-high-of-marijuana-to-antidepressants-love-has-its-own-ways-2/

    follow the blog if you like it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ANCHAL94 says:

      Finally someone figured out the story behind my poem. I’m glad to hear from you. Also, I’ll definately check your blog, once I’m over your appreciation 😛. Thanks!

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Zovi says:

    Amazing! You weave emotions so intricately 🌸

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ANCHAL94 says:

      You made my day! Thanks. 💕💕

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Zovi says:

        The pleasure is mine!

        Liked by 1 person

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