Scars and bruises never stay,
the way her name is inked an ample deep.
She lives until eternity, is all I can pray
While I’m departing and she won’t weep.
I embrace the last site my eyes sought,
a poised smile on her soft face
What thoughts were really bought
and, was I ever a part of her fame?
I applaud all those faces, they
make my love turn to fog.
The humorous fact is now I’m away,
Was I ever told she moved on?
They describe her as subtle,
ingenious, but another way a lot brazen.
“she’s so chatty and a lot to handle!”
she was on a path away from the haven.
But mind you, I’m done.
She’s happy and that’d end my role.
In her heart, I made a pretty sketch,
but now I’m letting her go…
Note:
This is very much random, and apparently, I was supposed to write something about ‘letting her go’ but a bit poetry wouldn’t hurt, now would it? Please tell me in the comment section below. Thanks! X
Love
Anchal.
Hello! I enjoyed giving your poem a read, I especially liked the 3rd and 4th lines in the 3rd stanza, It reminded me of a similar situation I had experienced previously. I look forward to seeing what else you create!
-Opal
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I’m so glad! Thanks. Xx
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A pretty sketch indeed, you’re very good at this. Keep it up!
Will follow for more 😊
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I really appreciate it. Thanks love! Xx
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Most welcome
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Priceless lines …real creation ….👍
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I’m so glad to hear this… thanks! Xx
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I love the way you write!💐
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I love that You commented! X 💖
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Haha, I had to. You write so well! :”)
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Thanks!
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Nicely written. Keep up the good work.
Not all love stories end up in happily ever after. How a small town guy was left collecting the rummages of his love after being crushed by a big town girl.
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Finally someone figured out the story behind my poem. I’m glad to hear from you. Also, I’ll definately check your blog, once I’m over your appreciation 😛. Thanks!
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Amazing! You weave emotions so intricately 🌸
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You made my day! Thanks. 💕💕
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The pleasure is mine!
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